Thursday, 10 May 2012

Uneasiness,
growing misunderstanding,
no right words
to clarify the truth,
anger.


A bolt from the blue
are your eyes staring at mine,
so unexpected.
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2 comments:

  1. Freya Pickard21 May 2012 at 04:22

    I really like the way you link an elfje with a haiku - maybe I ought to try that sometime...

    The unease in the elfje doesn't prepare the reader for the startling eyes in the haiku - good shock technique!

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  2. claudia messelodi21 May 2012 at 05:17

    Thanks so much Freya for all your precious and very useful comments!

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