tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2592569041860686839.post1000032080512838832..comments2024-03-24T13:46:20.386-07:00Comments on a stream of small stones: claudia messelodihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11103925056352058340noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2592569041860686839.post-84353727016719350152012-05-21T05:17:01.236-07:002012-05-21T05:17:01.236-07:00Thanks so much Freya for all your precious and ver...Thanks so much Freya for all your precious and very useful comments!claudia messelodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11103925056352058340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2592569041860686839.post-3241325122878114542012-05-21T04:22:08.434-07:002012-05-21T04:22:08.434-07:00I really like the way you link an elfje with a ha...I really like the way you link an elfje with a haiku - maybe I ought to try that sometime...<br /><br />The unease in the elfje doesn't prepare the reader for the startling eyes in the haiku - good shock technique!Freya Pickardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12717386807426284842noreply@blogger.com