would love to share my words with the world, to contribute in my own small way to the big river of stones..
Beautiful. I love the last line.
Thank you Libby!
a perfect haiku - colour, kigo, a snapshot image - I'd love this one for Pure Haiku too... love the gold and the dark, the image of the quivering kites... excellent movement and drama
Many thanks Freya! Please, feel free to publish it on PureHaiku, I would feel really grateful!