Monday, 16 January 2012

Small sparrows' swift claws
sink scared into the shiny
white mantle of snow.
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  1. Maggie16 January 2012 at 14:16

    Isn't alliteration fun?!

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  2. Linda19 January 2012 at 18:32

    Love this, such great mouth feel when you say it aloud.

    In Italian, how does it sound? Peace...

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    1. claudia messelodi20 January 2012 at 04:04

      Yes, I agree. If I had to translate it into Italian, it wouldn't sound like this at all..I would have to change the words and maybe the entire image to create a haiku with alliterations and some kind of "rhythm"..
      I like the English language best, it's more rhythmical and rich in a sense..I simply adore it!
      Love

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