Tuesday, 19 June 2012

A tiny red cloud
in the pearl grey sky at dawn,
winks, then fades away.


  1. This is so beautiful, I can see that little red cloud!

  2. Thank you so much, Libby! While admiring that red little cloud from my window early that morning (it was about five thirty a.m.), I kind of felt it wanted to tell me something in a way..and I suddenly understood who the cloud was and what it represented. It has meant a lot to me; such a soothing, healing experience.

  3. Lovely. I'm building a forum to feature poets on my blog. If you are interested, please, check the guidelines for submission at http://scarlettrainspoeticmusings.blogspot.com/ and email me.

    1. Huge thanks, Scarlett! I'm really interested in the forum on your blog, I'll have a look and let you know, warmest regards

  4. red cloud? red star? this has both a comforting and slightly edgy feel to it - I like the ambiguity

  5. I've seen those tiny clouds at sunrise and sunset - the ones you couldn't see at full light because they are so small and thin. They always come painted the most beautiful colors, as if to reward someone who pays attention to the sky.

  6. Thank you for your wonderful comment! I agree with you...