Friday, 4 January 2013

Sky's golden petals
quiver as kites in the wind -
the night curtain drops.

4 comments:

  1. a perfect haiku - colour, kigo, a snapshot image - I'd love this one for Pure Haiku too... love the gold and the dark, the image of the quivering kites... excellent movement and drama

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  2. Many thanks Freya! Please, feel free to publish it on PureHaiku, I would feel really grateful!

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